Translation Revision
Directions: Each of the following translated sentences is inadequate. Revise the given versions.原文:Northern and Southern Adelaide are divided by the Torrens River, spanned by four bridges and lined with ornamental gardens.
译文:阿德莱德南北两区被托伦斯河分割,河上有四座桥梁,两岸点缀着许多花园。改译:
【正确答案】:
阿德莱德南北两区以托伦斯河为界,河上有四座桥梁,两岸点缀着许多花园。
【题目解析】:注意意译及相应汉语词语的选择,“以……为界”更符合汉语表达。阿德莱德南北两区以托伦斯河为界,河上有四座桥梁,两岸点缀着许多花园。
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